Tuesday, November 10, 2009

THE WOOL POOH


I didn’t even believe one word Byron was saying. He said that Winnie the pooh had an evil twin the wool pooh. He said it live in the water in collier landing. But I dint believe him one bit. I was going to prove to him that his lire. Better than going to the beach I went to collier landing the water was so blue dark. I was thinking that collier just was trying to keep this to himself greedy man. I jumped in the water. They were little fish tickling my feet I tried to grab them but they were too slippery. Out in the deep I saw a big old turtle just standing there I went deeper to try to get it. When I got there it swam away. I was in big trouble I had swum to the deep and I was drowning. After my head went down twice I knew I was done for. I had felt a creepy hand trying to grab me I felt so scared. I knew I was going to die I kicked the water trying to escape but he was too strong for me but then I felt some one helping me and kicking the wool pooh.I was so relieved but still scared Bryon got me out of the water. He was crying when I saw him he was like mumbling my name like "kkeeeennnnnyyy!!!!" he started hugging me very tight me and him went walking home together. He said "don't mention this to nobody" OK I said

6 comments:

  1. Proofread for errors and capitalization!

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  2. lol cool you did a good job so dont drop the soap

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  3. nice picture you did a great job with the story and the picture

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  4. Completion= 40/40
    Spelling= 4/10
    Creativity= 28/30
    Pictures= 8/10
    Map= 10/10

    Total= 90

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